I'm partway through SOTR but have noticed a trend throughout the book in which multiple LLM tropes are thrown out in quick succession. This comes between prose much more in-keeping with Collins' typical voice.
As I say, this is something I've noticed throughout, but this section was particularly egregious:
Transparent wings tinted every color of the rainbow flash above me. They catch the firelight, making them shine like the hard candy in the Donners' shop window on a sunny day. It’d be something to admire, except each three-foot-wide pair of wings carries a vicious face and two back feet sporting four-inch curved claws. Genetically engineered bat muttations. Designed to shred me to slaw.
These creatures haven't broken out of a cage; they're a gift from the Capitol.
One hundred thirty-six, one hundred thirty-seven —
"Haymitch!" I hear Ampert cry out. "Catch!"
He releases the torch, which scatters the bat formation for a second, and I somehow manage to grab it. With my free hand, I begin to scale the ladder, waving the fire above my head. But these are no butterflies, simple to ignite and destroy; they are sinewy mammals that can turn on a dime. They evade my torch and begin to claw me, taking painful swipes at my shoulders and back, causing blood to flow. Climb I must, though, because the clock’s ticking and if I’m not above ground, I’ll be drowned for sure.
Genuinely, if this wasn't generated by a LLM, I don't know how it passed so many levels of revisions from Collins and her editors. It is only made more apparent by Collins' natural prose, which I can see clearly in neighbouring paragraphs.
I'm not sure if anyone else noticed this when reading. I understand that LLMs are scraped from popular books and it only makes sense that this kind of passage sounds like gen-AI if models were trained on the original trilogy, but it is disconcerting to read.