r/redditserials • u/Street_Witness1328 • 34m ago
Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 170 - Platform
On November twentieth, I woke before the alarm.
Five twenty-eight.
The train was not until seven forty-two.
Too early.
I lay there for another minute.
Then got up.
The bag had been packed the night before.
Two shirts.
Underwear.
Socks.
Sweater.
Toiletries.
Book.
Phone charger.
No temple documents.
No robe.
No card.
The Kyoto postcard was still in the desk drawer.
I had considered bringing it.
Then decided against it.
Mizuno did not need evidence that he had once sent me mail.
Neither did I.
At six ten, I made tea.
Drank it.
Not good.
Not terrible.
Mine.
Then checked the train ticket for the fourth time.
Departure.
Connection.
Seat.
Arrival.
Nothing had changed overnight.
I put the phone away.
At six thirty-two, the doorbell rang.
I stared at the door.
No one was supposed to come.
Opened it.
Takahashi.
“Why are you here?”
“To take you to the station.”
“I didn’t ask.”
“I know.”
“I can drive.”
“And leave your car there for three days.”
“Yes.”
“Why?”
“Because parking exists.”
“So do friends.”
There.
He looked past me.
“Ready?”
I should have objected longer.
Did not want to.
“Yes.”
“Good.”
No.
I let him have it.
He took my bag.
“I can carry that.”
“I know.”
“Then why?”
“Because I’m already holding it.”
That was irritatingly effective.
He put it in the back of his car.
I locked the house.
Then checked the lock.
Takahashi watched.
“Again?”
“No.”
“You looked.”
“That is not checking.”
“You touched the handle.”
“Drive.”
He did.
The roads were quiet.
Dark still fading.
Heater working without rattling.
I noticed.
Said nothing.
Takahashi said:
“You noticed.”
“What?”
“The heater.”
“No.”
“You looked.”
“I looked at the dashboard.”
“Liar.”
We drove.
After five minutes he asked:
“Nervous?”
“Yes.”
No point pretending.
“What part?”
“Arrival.”
“Not the train?”
“No.”
“Mizuno?”
“Yes.”
“Yuko?”
“Yes.”
“Guest room?”
“No.”
“Food?”
“No.”
He nodded.
Then:
“What do you think is going to happen?”
“I don’t know.”
“That is usually what arriving is.”
I looked at him.
“That was almost useful.”
“Garage wisdom.”
“No.”
He smiled.
At the station, he pulled over near the entrance.
Six fifty-eight.
Too early.
Again.
I took my bag from the back.
Takahashi got out too.
“You don’t need to come in.”
“I know.”
“Then?”
“Coffee.”
Of course.
We went inside.
The station was already busy enough to prevent the morning from feeling private.
Rolling suitcases.
School uniforms.
Announcements.
A woman trying to keep two children together.
A man asleep near a wall outlet.
We bought coffee.
Takahashi drank his immediately.
Mine was too hot.
We stood near the departure board.
My train appeared there.
Kyoto did not.
Not directly.
Several steps first.
That felt appropriate.
No.
It was simply the route.
Takahashi looked at the board.
“Call when you arrive.”
“I’ll message.”
“Call.”
“Why?”
“I want to hear whether Mizuno is real.”
I laughed.
“He spoke to me.”
“Could be elaborate fraud.”
“For what?”
“Postcard recovery.”
“Nine-year operation.”
“Patient criminals.”
I drank coffee.
Then:
“I’ll call.”
Takahashi nodded.
No further demand.
The platform announcement came.
Still time.
I picked up the bag.
He said:
“Enjoy it.”
“I’ll try.”
“No.”
I looked at him.
“What?”
“Don’t try to enjoy it.”
“That is strangely specific.”
“Just go.”
There.
Better.
I nodded.
“See you Sunday?”
“If you return.”
“I have a return ticket.”
“Evidence.”
I smiled.
“See you Sunday.”
“See you.”
I went through the gate.
He stayed outside.
Did not wave theatrically.
Neither did I.
The train left on time.
For the first twenty minutes, I read.
Then realized I had read the same page twice.
Closed the book.
Outside:
buildings.
Fields.
Stations.
Snow in some shaded places.
Nothing unusual.
I was traveling to see an old friend.
That sentence remained strange.
Not because false.
Because newly current.
Mizuno sent a message at eight sixteen.
Awake?
I replied:
On train.
Good.
No.
I smiled.
Then:
Yuko says lunch depends on arrival.
Train is on time.
She says trains lie.
She may be right.
Nothing else.
At the first transfer, I almost went to the wrong platform.
Not entirely wrong.
Same direction.
Different train.
I noticed before boarding.
That was sufficient.
No metaphor.
By noon, I was tired of sitting.
The seat was comfortable enough.
Still a seat.
I ate a boxed lunch.
Not memorable.
Rice.
Fish.
Pickles.
I sent no photograph to Takahashi.
He would ask whether I had bought train-shaped sweets soon enough.
Kyoto became real first as an announcement.
Then buildings.
Then tracks multiplying.
Then the station roof.
People stood before the doors opened.
I remained seated until movement made sense.
Bag.
Coat.
Phone.
No card.
No postcard.
Just me.
The platform was crowded.
I stepped out.
For several seconds, I did not move.
Not because emotional.
Because I needed to know which direction to go.
Signs.
Central exit.
Mizuno had written:
I’ll wait near the large clock.
There were several clocks.
Of course.
I followed the crowd.
The station was larger than memory.
Or my memory had reduced it.
Either way.
I reached the concourse.
People everywhere.
I looked for Mizuno.
Did not see him.
Looked again.
A man in a dark coat.
No.
Too young.
Another.
No.
Then someone raised one hand.
Not high.
Just enough.
I knew the gesture before the face.
Mizuno.
Older.
Gray at the temples.
Thinner than I remembered.
Glasses now.
Same posture.
He stood perhaps fifteen meters away.
For a moment neither of us moved.
Then he walked toward me.
I did the same.
We stopped too far apart to shake hands naturally.
Then both tried.
Awkward.
He laughed first.
“So.”
“Yes.”
“You came.”
“Yes.”
He looked at the bag.
“Only that?”
“Three days.”
“You used to travel with too much.”
“I improved.”
“Unproven.”
There.
Voice.
Face.
Actual person.
Not postcard.
Not phone.
Mizuno.
He looked at me for a few seconds.
“You look older.”
“So do you.”
“I was going to say well.”
“You missed the chance.”
“I can restart.”
“No.”
He laughed.
Then:
“Yuko said not to make the first five minutes strange.”
“How long has it been?”
He looked at his watch.
“About forty seconds.”
“Then we have time.”
We both laughed.
That helped.
He reached for my bag.
I held it.
“No.”
He stopped.
“I was going to carry it.”
“I know.”
“Guest.”
“I can carry my bag.”
He looked at me.
Then released the handle.
“Still difficult.”
“Yes.”
“Good.”
No.
I almost corrected.
Then remembered who had used the word years before Takahashi began persecuting me for it.
Maybe Mizuno was part of the original problem.
“Were you always like that?”
“What?”
“‘Good.’”
He frowned.
“You called yesterday to ask me that?”
“No.”
“Then later.”
We walked.
Yuko was waiting outside by a car.
I recognized her before she spoke.
Older too.
Hair shorter.
Same eyes.
She looked at me.
Then at Mizuno.
Then back at me.
“You remembered my name.”
“Yuko-san.”
“Excellent.”
“I deserved that.”
“Yes.”
She bowed.
I bowed.
Then she smiled.
“Welcome.”
That word reached differently.
Not:
You finally came.
Not:
Where have you been?
Welcome.
Present tense.
“Thank you.”
She opened the trunk.
I put my own bag inside before either of them could.
Mizuno sighed.
Yuko said:
“Let him.”
Good.
No.
I did not say anything.
The drive from the station was quieter than expected.
Not awkward exactly.
Full.
Too many possible things.
Yuko solved it by talking about lunch.
“We can eat at home or stop somewhere.”
Mizuno said:
“Home.”
She looked at me in the mirror.
“What do you want?”
“Home is fine.”
“That is not what I asked.”
Of course.
Everyone had learned from someone.
“Home.”
She nodded.
“Then home.”
Decision made.
Mizuno’s temple was smaller than mine.
Much smaller.
Narrow road.
Stone wall.
Modest gate.
Main hall with repaired roof.
The repair was visible if you knew to look.
I did not know.
Mizuno pointed anyway.
“Second time.”
“The roof?”
“Yes.”
“Same section?”
“No.”
“Better.”
He looked at me.
“You still grade things.”
“I asked a factual question.”
Yuko unlocked the residence.
“Come inside before you two become unbearable.”
We did.
Three cats appeared within two minutes.
Not neighborhood metaphor.
Actual cats.
One black.
One orange.
One gray.
The orange one approached me first.
Mizuno said:
“That one bites.”
I stopped.
Yuko said:
“He doesn’t.”
Mizuno said:
“He bit me.”
“You stepped on his tail.”
“Context should not excuse violence.”
I looked at the cat.
It rubbed against my leg.
“Apparently I am safer.”
Mizuno stared.
“Nine years and immediate betrayal.”
The room began to feel less difficult.
Lunch was noodles.
Homemade.
Yuko had prepared too much.
Of course.
Some things crossed prefectures.
We sat at a low table.
Three bowls.
Pickles.
Tea.
No formal guest arrangement.
I was grateful.
For the first ten minutes, we talked about the train.
Predictable.
Then the temple.
Roof.
Parish households.
Neighborhood.
Nothing personal enough to frighten anyone.
Then Yuko said:
“You both know you can stop pretending you met last week.”
Mizuno put down his chopsticks.
“I wasn’t.”
“You are discussing gutters.”
“Gutters matter.”
She looked at me.
“He talked about you for two days.”
Mizuno closed his eyes.
“You promised.”
“I promised nothing.”
I almost laughed into the tea.
Yuko continued:
“He cleaned the guest room himself.”
“That seems appropriate.”
“He never cleans the guest room himself.”
Mizuno said:
“I changed the sheets.”
“You moved furniture.”
“There was dust.”
“You checked the heater three times.”
“Winter.”
She looked at me.
“He was nervous.”
There.
Mizuno stared at his bowl.
I saved him.
“So was I.”
He looked up.
“Really?”
“Yes.”
That seemed to surprise him.
“Why?”
Large question.
I answered smaller.
“Because I hadn’t seen you in years.”
He nodded.
“Yes.”
That was enough.
Yuko resumed eating.
Intervention complete.
After lunch, Mizuno showed me the temple.
Not as a tour guide.
More like someone showing a colleague where the problems were.
Crack near the storeroom.
New wiring.
Old bell.
The bell he had said he disliked.
He struck it once.
I listened.
“Why do you hate it?”
“Too bright.”
“It is a bell.”
“It can still be too bright.”
I listened again.
Maybe.
He asked:
“Well?”
“I don’t hate it.”
“That is not helpful.”
“You asked my opinion.”
“I wanted agreement.”
“Then ask for agreement.”
He laughed.
“Still you.”
There.
I felt it.
Not entirely pleasant.
Not unpleasant.
Still you.
Was I?
Some parts.
Not others.
I said nothing.
The guest room was at the end of a corridor.
Tatami.
Small table.
Heater.
Folded bedding.
Window toward the side garden.
Mizuno stood at the door.
“Too cold?”
“No.”
“Extra blanket in closet.”
“Yes.”
“Bathroom—”
“I can find it.”
“You always said that.”
“Did I?”
“Yes.”
“You remember strange things.”
“So do you.”
Fair.
He left my bag near the wall.
Then said:
“Rest if you want.”
There.
Not:
Come talk.
Not:
We have nine years to cover.
Rest.
“I might.”
“Tea at four?”
I checked the clock.
Two twenty.
“Yes.”
He nodded.
Then left.
Door remained open.
I closed it halfway.
Not fully.
No reason.
I sat.
Quiet.
Actual quiet.
Different temple sounds.
Floor creak somewhere.
A door.
Distant bell? No.
Maybe traffic.
I took out my phone.
Message from Takahashi:
Real?
I laughed.
Called.
He answered immediately.
“Well?”
“I’m here.”
“Mizuno?”
“Real.”
“Yuko?”
“Also real.”
“Cats?”
I stopped.
“How do you know about the cats?”
“You told me.”
Had I?
Maybe.
“Yes. Three.”
“Train?”
“Worked.”
“Souvenir?”
“No.”
“Unacceptable.”
I looked toward the half-closed door.
Then said:
“It was strange at first.”
Takahashi’s voice changed slightly.
“Bad?”
“No.”
“Still strange?”
“Less.”
“Good.”
No.
I let him have it.
Then:
“He cleaned the guest room because he was nervous.”
Takahashi laughed.
“You told him you were nervous?”
“Yes.”
“And?”
“He looked surprised.”
“People think priests are furniture.”
“That makes no sense.”
“You know what I mean.”
Unfortunately.
Then Takahashi said:
“Go be there.”
There.
Not:
Call later.
Not:
Tell me everything.
Go be there.
“Yes.”
“Call Sunday if you need a ride.”
“I can take a taxi.”
“I know.”
“Then?”
“If you want one.”
I smiled.
“I’ll let you know.”
“Fine.”
No.
He hung up.
At four, tea.
Mizuno and I sat in a small room beside the residence.
Yuko had gone shopping.
Just us.
For the first minute, we discussed the tea.
Then stopped.
No Yuko to force transition.
No Takahashi.
No third person.
Nine years sat down with us.
Mizuno looked into his cup.
Then:
“I almost didn’t call you back.”
I looked at him.
“After my first call?”
“Yes.”
“Why?”
“I was angry.”
There.
I had not expected that.
Not exactly.
“About what?”
He looked at me.
“You disappeared.”
I felt the answer before I could defend myself.
Then he added:
“So did I.”
There.
Good.
No.
Accurate.
He continued:
“I knew that. Still angry.”
“How long?”
“When?”
“After I saw the missed call.”
“About five minutes.”
I smiled slightly.
“That is short.”
“It was concentrated.”
I laughed.
He did too.
Then his face settled.
“I thought: why now?”
“Yes.”
“And then I wanted to know.”
“So you called.”
“Yes.”
Silence.
Tea.
I said:
“I didn’t know you had changed temples.”
“I know.”
“I didn’t know about the roof.”
“Very serious.”
“I nearly forgot Yuko’s name.”
“That was unforgivable.”
“Yes.”
He smiled.
Then:
“I didn’t know your teacher died until someone told me later.”
“Yes.”
“I should have called.”
Maybe.
He looked at me.
“You hate should.”
“I don’t hate it.”
“You used to.”
“I used to hate people using it badly.”
“Same thing.”
“No.”
He laughed.
Again.
Then:
“I wanted to call.”
“When?”
“After I heard.”
“And?”
“I didn’t.”
“Why?”
“I thought too much time had passed.”
There.
The old trap.
Not mine alone.
“What changed?”
He looked around.
“You called first.”
Simple.
I drank tea.
Then said:
“I almost didn’t leave a message.”
“You didn’t.”
“Exactly.”
“I still called back.”
“Yes.”
“Which makes me morally superior.”
“No.”
“Clearly.”
We smiled.
The conversation became easier again.
Later, he asked:
“Did the postcard really make you call?”
“Yes.”
“Why that day?”
“I had taken a day off.”
He stared.
“You?”
“Yes.”
“Voluntarily?”
“Mostly.”
“Who forced you?”
“A friend.”
There.
He noticed.
“Friend?”
“Yes.”
“Takahashi?”
I looked at him.
“You remember him.”
“Of course I remember him.”
That surprised me.
“What do you remember?”
“He hated mushrooms.”
I stared.
Mizuno laughed.
“I met him twice.”
“I had forgotten that.”
“Apparently.”
“Anything else?”
“He thought I talked too much.”
“That remains plausible.”
“And he fixed your bicycle.”
That memory returned.
Slowly.
A broken rear brake.
Years ago.
Before so much else.
“Yes.”
Mizuno smiled.
“So you two are talking again.”
“Yes.”
“How?”
There.
Cards.
Could explain without contents.
I did.
Not every detail.
The existence of two cards.
Names.
Custody confusion.
Eventually each reaching the right person.
Tea.
Calls.
Fishing.
Friendship.
I did not tell him the words on either card.
No need.
Mizuno listened.
At the end he said:
“That is the most complicated route to coffee I’ve ever heard.”
“Yes.”
“Could have called him.”
“Yes.”
“So could he.”
“Yes.”
We both laughed.
Familiar answer.
Then Mizuno said:
“Maybe you only call people when paper attacks you.”
I looked at him.
Card.
Postcard.
“Apparently.”
“That is unhealthy.”
“Maybe.”
“I’ll send you a letter every year.”
“No.”
“So you maintain relationships.”
“No.”
“Registered mail.”
“Absolutely not.”
He laughed.
The old version of us appeared for a moment.
Not restored.
Recognizable.
Enough.
Yuko returned at six with groceries.
Dinner became practical.
Cut vegetables.
Set table.
Mizuno tried to help.
Yuko sent him away because he cut things too thick.
I offered.
She looked at me.
“Can you cut vegetables?”
“Yes.”
Mizuno called from the other room:
“Verify.”
I ignored him.
Yuko handed me a knife.
I cut.
Apparently acceptable.
No priest role.
No guest exemption.
Just dinner.
I liked that.
At the table later, Yuko asked:
“Did you two solve nine years?”
Mizuno said:
“Yes.”
I said:
“No.”
At the same time.
She looked between us.
Then:
“Good. Dinner first.”
No.
We both laughed.
We ate for more than an hour.
Not discussing the lost years.
Mostly current things.
Yuko’s work.
Temple neighborhood.
My temple renovations.
Takahashi.
The cats.
A local shop closing.
A restaurant that no longer existed.
Occasionally:
Do you remember—
Sometimes yes.
Sometimes no.
No one treated forgetting as betrayal.
That helped.
At nine, I returned to the guest room.
Not exhausted.
Full.
From food and conversation.
My phone had one message from Takahashi.
Museum souvenir.
I wrote:
I am in Kyoto for a human being.
Kyoto has shops.
I did not reply.
Then:
Hope it’s okay.
That one I answered.
It is.
Pause.
Good.
No.
I smiled.
I lay down.
Different ceiling.
Different temple.
Mizuno perhaps ten meters away.
For years he had been a name in contacts.
Then a voice.
Now a person in another room.
Nothing had been repaired tonight.
No account settled.
No promise that we would speak every month after this.
He had been angry.
So had I, perhaps in quieter ways.
Both had failed to call.
Both had wanted to.
Neither fact canceled the others.
Tomorrow we would probably talk more.
Maybe about difficult things.
Maybe about gutters.
Both were possible.
Before sleeping, I thought of the station.
Large clock.
Crowd.
Mizuno raising one hand.
That was the moment I had feared most.
Not because I expected rejection.
Because imagination ended there.
Before the platform, I could imagine any reunion.
Warm.
Awkward.
Disappointing.
Perfect.
Once I saw him, all those versions disappeared.
There was only the man actually standing fifteen meters away.
Older.
Glasses.
Dark coat.
Same small hand gesture.
I had walked toward him.
He had walked toward me.
No card had told either of us to.
No postcard had required it.
No one needed anything repaired.
We had chosen a date.
Bought a ticket.
Arrived.
For the first time in nine years, the distance between us had become something measured in steps.
And then we took them.




