When the God of Balance falls, the consequences reach far beyond the heavens.

A fallen celestial guardian carrying a demonic curse joins an unlikely band of companions drawn into a deadly necromantic conspiracy. Their journey takes them through dangerous kingdoms, forgotten civilizations, and mysteries left behind by the gods themselves.

But ancient evils aren't the only dangers they face.

Friendships will be tested. Loyalties will fracture. And some sacrifices will change them forever.

Final Destiny: The Book of Inoma is a character-driven dark epic fantasy blending high-stakes adventure, divine mythology, companionship, humor, with a taste of romance, and tragedy.

I'm looking for 4–6 beta readers who enjoy immersive fantasy adventures and would be interested in reading my completed debut novel.

I'm particularly interested in your experience as a reader: which characters you connected with, which moments stayed with you, Character development and emotional attachment, Dialogue and relationships, whether anything became confusing, Pacing and reader engagement, Worldbuilding clarity, and whether the ending made you want to continue the series.

I'm looking for candid, constructive reader reactions rather than proofreading or line editing.

A reading window of approximately 6–8 weeks would be ideal, but I'm flexible.

I'll share the manuscript privately with interested readers. You're welcome to try the opening chapters before committing to the full book.

If this sounds like an adventure you'd enjoy, please send me a message!

Hello, hoping to find a couple of readers who enjoy eco-horror, evil building trope, morally ambiguous characters, dark/absurd humour and tragedy.

CW for depression, addiction, body horror, deaths, there's a bit of sex but no actual spice, there's a lot of swearing and a bit of violence. It's got a lot of gallows humour in it as well. It's definitely not for the faint-hearted.

Attempt at a blurb (possibly contains slight spoilers):

Joe was once a promising surgeon living on the bright upper floors but life in the decaying organism known as the Tower has pushed him into addiction and despair. He does what he can to help the sick children of the dark and toxic lower levels, known as The Guts, where life is cheap and rebellion is brewing. Joe's ex, Cal, is a high-ranking scientist whose job it is to find solutions to enable the workmen to repair and patch up the building's ulcers and failing systems. Cal is disgusted by Joe's deterioration and doesn't understand this bleeding-heart liberal need of his to help the undeserving poor but for various reasons is unable to just turn away and move on. Meanwhile, Joe's partner Lee, a militant trade unionist from The Guts, fights to keep Joe alive and to mobilise his community against the upper-floor elite that is the main cause of the Tower's slow death. As the Tower consumes human life indiscriminately and Cal and Lee struggle to find a solution from their very different points of view, Joe is drawn back in to try and save humanity from looming ecological collapse and disaster.

This story gets pretty visceral in places so if you're squeamish it might not appeal. I'm very flexible regarding timeline - if you can manage it within three months that'd be great but no problem if you need longer. I would love to do a swap - adult fiction only though and I prefer it written in past tense (1st or 3rd is fine). I can send you the first chapter to let you decide before making any big time commitment. Also happy to do part swaps e.g. if you've only time to read half or a quarter of it.

Feedback I'm looking for is mainly... whether the prose is any good and if the story draws you in and keeps you wanting to read, if the science/mechanics of the story make sense (biologists would be especially welcome as readers!), if the characters are believable and if you feel invested in their story even though they're not entirely likeable, if Joe is relatable and not annoying, if the humour is actually funny despite being horrible, if it's a good read overall. I've been working on this for a couple of years and friends of mine have said they love it but I really want a stranger's eyes on it who doesn't feel obliged to be kind!

Absolutely no AI please.

Hi Everyone,

I am hoping to find a beta reader or two who loves fantasy, and also gives good constructive feedback for early in-progress chapters. I have a set of questions I would like to receive feedback responses to. DM me if you would like to respond.

Also, I am definitely open to trading and reading short stories in fantasy too.

Back of Book

A 9-1-1 and Lord of the Rings: The Rings of Power Crossover. A warehouse fire in Los Angeles leaves Buck and Eddie stranded in Middle-earth, with dwindling supplies and no way to contact the 118. Somewhere between treating their first injured stranger and meeting Galadriel, they learn that their arrival was foretold. Apparently, someone decided two firefighters were what this world needed. Sauron is searching for the Unspent Ember, a fragment of the world’s creation that could make the One Ring far more powerful than anyone can afford to imagine.

Hi everyone! I'm looking for a few beta readers for Part One of my adult epic fantasy, The Tide Between Worlds.

Blurb:
The Great Throat has never stopped falling. Then, one afternoon, it does.

Seventeen minutes later, the water returns, a young man is dead, and the official report is already a lie.

Harbour marshal Aven Tarow only wanted to go home to his pregnant wife. Instead he's sailing into the Upper Waters with a liar for a captain, chasing the people who are stealing the sea.

Feedback I’m looking for:
- Was there anywhere you got bored or started skimming?

- Does the world make sense without feeling like an info dump?

- Are the technical bits easy enough to follow?

- Would you keep reading after chapter 6?

If you are interested, DM me or comment and I'll send the link.

Humans were on the cusp of developing superintelligent machines and rockets to carry them to the stars. When, they revealed themselves...

The vampires, hidden rulers of the earth, emerged from their secret lairs. They smashed the computers, broke the rockets, and now all humans live under their rule: split into two, those who breed more eventual blood and those they take for themselves.

Alfred and Catherine are two humans in love, planning soon to breed. Yet the powerful Lady Fazira, vampire ruler of Ireland feels special affection towards Catherine and may claim her as her own. Catherine herself becomes torn between Alfred's mortal love, the chance of giving life, and a single rapturous night in Lady Fazira's castle.

I’m working on editing for my first spicy novella. It’s 12 chapters and my first foray into writing spicy rather than steamy scenes. It’s about a witch and the two devils she summons during a Beltane ritual. It’s MMF. The triggers that I can think of are poly relationships, death, murder, grief, revenge, double penetration, and witchcraft. I can do a critique swap for any genre, though fantasy is my favorite, keeping it under 40k words. I have a lot on my plate right now so I can’t do much more. Please comment or message me if you’re interested!
Also, I will NOT be paying for your service so please don’t solicit me

Hi everyone, I'm hoping to get some beta readers for my manuscript.

It follows Aristo. A blind fae is put into a trial under an agreement to protect a woman and get something in return. These are the first couple of lines:

There’s no rain here, no drumbeat of a storm or howling winds. No neighbours fighting or banging doors, rushing to get to work. It’s only quiet here, from sunrise to sunset. I hate how quiet it is. 
At first I loved the peace, that my mother’s clattering pans didn’t disturb my thoughts, or my brother crashing into my room, annoying the fuck out of me with his chatter. Then it became awful. Noise guides me. I can find things through noise. Here, I’m always lost. I wander halls and corridors in circles until I catch a whisper or a familiar smell. 
That’s another thing this place lacks. Scent. Anathal Castle smells of nothing. Not stone. Not food. Not magic. It’s just an empty place full of stuff.
Stuff I can’t see.

I'm only looking for the first few chapters to be read; it is complete, but it is going through an editing process, and I'm looking for an outside perspective. If this is something that would interest you, I'd be truly grateful. I am able to read through your first few chapters as well if you would like.

I do not have a particular timeline, but as it is only a couple of chapters, I would hope to receive the feedback in a week or two.

Possible triggers: violence, misogyny, explicit scenes that include MM.

Hi all,

First time poster and first time requesting a read.

Soul Star is about a grieving fifteen-year-old in the burning 1978 Bronx who teams up with a talking squirrel carrying a soldier’s soul from the future to stop an alien fire, and prove that destiny doesn’t decide who he becomes.

I wrote screenplays before and now taking a stab at a novel, naturally this story was one of my scripts.

Feedback: Does the story flow naturally? What confuses you? Do I get too wordy or "prose-y?" And any general feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Happy to swap! Happy to do a test run of a prologue and/or first chapter to see if it's something you would like to read.

Feel free to DM! Thanks!

Hello everyone! It's a medieval-coming of age fantasy written as a stand alone with the potential for a sequel. It is fairly straightforward as this was to be easy to digest for a first book debut.

The blurb/premise

Vixen an apprentice weaver moved to the town of Feathersong with her adoptive father, in the hopes of eventually succeeding her father's talents. But she is quickly set on a new path when she accidentally starts uncovering the secrets that lay beneath the sweet village facade.

After a chance encounter with a man suspected to be apart of a cult Vixen quickly has to decide who to trust, and who must be protected. With the other apprentices of Feathersong they discover a dangerous magic in the kingdom, one that could save them or put them all in grave danger.

With the shadows tormenting her at every corner, Vixen has to overcome her fears and discover what is lurking beneath the surface of the village, before it comes to get her, or for the people she cares about most.

In depth summary (mild spoilers)

Vixen moved to Feathersong with her adoptive father Wolf, due to a request from the head priest Eliza who sought Wolf's skills. Upon arriving and meeting the other weavers apprentices Unbrine, Dante, and Thorn, Vixen is thrown into a world she was not prepared for.

After she is attacked by a strange man she is left reeling wondering why, along with some strange new powers. Thanks to Unbrine and Dante they discover that a mysterious cult has been operating in Feathersong, desperate for answers Vixen sets out to discover more.

She is terrified that she will be attacked again, or worse her father whom she loves more then anything. And in doing so, she and the other apprentices uncover a dangerous magic, one that was better left to rot. Vixen has to keep a dark secret from everyone she loves and learn to protect them from a distance before she makes a grave mistake that could cost everyone.

Feedback:

I would love advice on characters, pacing, plot structure, prose and world building! Any and all feedback is welcome, absolutely no ai tools please. This is my first full attempt at a book with the intention of publishing it, it is a simple story to be easy to digest.

Thanks for taking the time to read! Feel free to dm or comment!

Hi all. I'm a first-time author self-publishing a memoir called Serrated Love. It follows a relationship from its early days through a spiral of anxiety into an OCD episode, a psychiatric admission, and recovery. The tone is honest, with some dark humour.

Looking for: 3 to 5 readers who'll read the full manuscript over 4 to 6 weeks and answer a short set of questions (where it dragged, where it confused, which scenes landed, how the ending felt). I'm not looking for line edits or typo hunting.

Content warning: graphic and detailed distressing thoughts involving harm to others, suicidal ideation, a psych ward stay, and explicit sexual content in multiple scenes. Please only volunteer if you're comfortable with that. You're free to stop reading whenever you like.

Format: PDF / Google Doc (will send via DM). Deadline: November 30, 2026.

Happy to swap: I'll read a chapter or a short piece of yours in return if you'd like.

If you're interested, comment or message me and I'll send a short sign-up form. Thank you!

Hi everyone! I'm a new author looking for a few Spanish-speaking readers to take a quick look at my first novel, LOBOS DE ACERO: El alfa que no recuerda.

It's a paranormal fantasy featuring werewolves, military mystery, and slow-burn romance.

I've published the prologue and first two chapters (approximately 8,000 words), and I'd love some honest first impressions!

I'm mainly wondering: Does the opening grab your attention? Are the characters interesting? Would you keep reading?

Please DM me if you're interested, and I'll share the story link privately.

Thank you! 🐺❤️

Every summer from 1992 to 1996, the same families return to Blue Woods, a small coastal vacation community with a dock, a treehouse and their rituals that feel like they'll last forever. Leah, now 41, looks back on those five summers with Matthew and Jacob: the mixtapes, the sand dollars, the games that get a little smaller (as they get a little bigger) each year.
As the world around them changes, the summers, like all things, begin to end, and so does childhood itself. Some changes they see coming. Others they never see at all.

Told in Leah's adult voice, woven through with scenes from each summer, Summers Gone By is about growing up, the things we take that aren't ours, and how a single moment can split an entire life into before and after.

Details:
Prologue, 14 chapters, 7 interludes, epilogue
Content warnings: drowning, death of young people, grief, bullying, abuse, alcoholism
What I'm looking for: Big-picture reactions. Where you got bored or confused, which characters you cared about, and whether the ending lands or not. I have a questionnaire if anybody would like that kind of structure, but honest gut reactions are just as welcome truly.
Timeline: about 4–6 weeks, happy to share chapter by chapter or whatever works best for you.
Happy to swap
Comment or DM me if you're interested. Thanks!

Hi all!

Author here looking for alpha readers for my novel The Lies We Worship.

THE LIES WE WORSHIP is a dark gothic romantasy about forbidden love, stolen divinity, and the terrible cost of uncovering the truth.

Back of book excerpt

The dead are restless. The heavens are silent. And the Church is lying.

When Thalia’s life becomes entangled with forces she was never meant to understand, she finds herself caught between a faith built on secrets and a mysterious man whose devotion may be as dangerous as the truths he refuses to tell.

As the boundary between life and death begins to fracture, Thalia must decide who to trust before everything she believes in comes undone.

Feedback

Looking primarily for first impressions, questions, comments, concerns. This is a first read out to
the public after my trusted circle. I’m looking to gain a small circle of readers to help with feedback before heading towards publishing!

PDF or Google Doc copies available in chapter chunks.

Please be responsive, genuine, and a little kind. This is near and dear to my heart and my first time pursuing public opinion on my writing.

xoxo, Scarlett

Hello fellow readers/writers!

Hoping to find a beta reader who loves fantasy, and also gives good constructive feedback. Looking for general likability, but also notes on flow and plot issues.

Up for a trade, but would like to start just trading the first 3 chapters to see if we are a good match.

Back of book blurb:

Cassidy is an unattached woman doing her best to move through life the only way she really knows how, by instinct and impulse.

Swiping right and casual dates take a sharp turn when she agrees to a weekend trip and is thrust into a world that shouldn’t exist, rebuilt from the ashes after a virus has left its women unable to reproduce. A world held together by controlled magic and a fragile balance, reliant on a full moon to open a gate between their world and hers.

As the next full moon draws near, something in Cassidy begins to stir, the magic settling in her blood pulling at her thoughts, her memories, and the thin thread still binding her to home. Her only ally in this place is her designated match Caelric, who has spent his life choosing isolation and quiet rebellion.

Now Cassidy must navigate a society that wants to claim her, a man who refuses to cage her, and a moon that seems to be waiting for her decision. Stay and fall into a world that will reshape her, or fight her way back and risk the consequences not just for herself, but for an entire civilization that may not survive without sacrifice.

TRIGGERS: Violence, Abduction/kidnapping, murder, trafficking, Infertility

If you are interested please send me a DM!

I wrote my first series and my beta were friends and 2 random people who i became close with. I'm going straight for ARC with the first one [90k] words the second is also ready [100k] the series is long so what should i do? I can't have betas for book 2 who haven't read book1

When students start turning up dead at Metropolis Academy, nineteen-year-old Zack Argent starts investigating. The trail leads to Tyler Knox, a bullied non-bender who has stumbled upon an ancient weapon of terrifying power — and the soul of history's most dangerous killer waiting inside it.

Zack and his best friend Rirek must stop a resurrection nearly a thousand years in the making before their city becomes a graveyard.

The Last Hybrids: The Prime Gauntlet is Book 1 of a planned five-book fantasy series. I've been working on this story for years, and Book 1 now has a completed draft. I'm looking for beta readers to give me an outside perspective on the opening three chapters before I move further with revisions and publishing plans.

Details:

• Book 1 is complete.
• Initial reading request: first three chapters, approximately 10,250 words.
• Genre: Fantasy.

What I'm looking for: Honest reactions to the opening. Did the story grab your attention? Which characters stood out to you? How did the pacing feel? Were there any confusing moments? What did you enjoy, and what could be improved? Most importantly, after Chapter 3, would you want to read Chapter 4?

I have an anonymous questionnaire for anyone who prefers structured feedback, but honest gut reactions are just as welcome.

Timeline: Ideally 2–3 weeks for the opening chapters, but I'm flexible.

Happy to swap.

If you're interested, please comment or DM me, and I'll share the view-only document privately. Thanks!

Editing the body since I can't edit the title, word count is 2880 without 'K' - apologies, I'm new to Reddit :)

Hi guys. I would really appreciate a brutally honest assessment of my first two chapters. Can you help me?

It’s a contemporary romance with a dual POV: a former Army captain who owns a small-town bar with his injured best friend, and a woman whose path leads straight to him. Chapter 1 is his POV and Chapter 2 is hers.

What I’d most like to know:

• Does Chapter 1 hook you? Where did you want to keep reading, and where did you start to lose interest?
• Do the two POV voices feel distinct from each other?
• Does Chapter 2 keep the momentum?

Content notes: mild profanity, and a physical altercation played for humor.

English is my second language, so please flag anything that sounds awkward or unnatural.

Please DM me and I’ll send you the Google Doc link

I'm happy to swap chapters if you would like feedback too! :)

Every summer from 1992 to 1996, the same families return to Blue Woods, a small coastal vacation community with a dock, a treehouse and their rituals that feel like they'll last forever. Leah, now 41, looks back on those five summers with Matthew and Jacob: the mixtapes, the sand dollars, the games that get a little smaller (as they get a little bigger) each year.
As the world around them changes, the summers, like all things, begin to end, and so does childhood itself. Some changes they see coming. Others they never see at all.
Told in Leah's adult voice, woven through with scenes from each summer, Summers Gone By is about growing up, the things we take that aren't ours, and how one moment can split a life into before and after.

Details:
Literary coming-of-age, about 96,000 words
Prologue, 14 chapters, 7 interludes, epilogue
Content warnings: drowning, death of young people, grief, bullying
What I'm looking for: Big-picture reactions. Where you got bored or confused, which characters you cared about, whether the ending lands. I have a questionnaire if you like structure, but honest gut reactions are just as welcome.
Timeline: [about 4–6 weeks, happy to share chapter by chapter]
Swap: [Happy to swap / Not swapping right now]
Comment or DM me if you're interested. Thanks!

Hello!
I’m in search of a few beta readers, probably 2-3.

The blurb is:
“Maevis is a young woman born into slavery on a continent ruled by the Fae. She is the court songstress and spends her nights warming the bed of the crown prince, with whom she has a complicated relationship. As her friend and fellow slave, Rion, finds himself drawn into a growing rebellion, Maevis is forced to break out of her gilded cage.”

I would prefer you to be 18+ since some topics in the novel are one the darker side (think emotional/physical/sexual abuse, death, child loss) etc.

And I would LOVE if you’re able to start rather fast since I’ve already lost some time with other readers who don’t reply anymore. If you start this and for whatever reason decide to or cannot finish, just letting me know.

DM me if you’re interested. I’m happy to provide the first few chapters at first before you commit fully.

Please comment or message me directly if you'd like access to the form!

Story Blurb:

Sythia has spent ten years away from the only homeland she's ever known, wandering the world with little more than a horse, a pigeon, and the burdens of a past she'd rather leave behind.

But when word reaches her that the Blossom Queen of Thaletiah is holding a competition to find a partner in royal duty, Sythia knows she cannot stay away any longer. With a hundred kilometres separating her from home and the woman she once loved, she sets out on a journey that could change everything.

Her destination is Thaletiah. Her goal is to win the heart of its queen. Her greatest uncertainty is whether thee queen even remembers her.

For Avelani is no longer the young woman Sythia left behind. She is a queen, with a kingdom to lead and a future to build. And when the two women finally meet again, Sythia must face the possibility that the love she has carried across a decade may exist only in her memories.

Looking for critique on pace, story beats, and how to better the structure of my book.

I'm having issues with my computer, so I may look at your feedback every few days. If you were to leave a critique on my work, I'd love for you to message me, so I know to check the document.

[Discussion] Visiting the awesome prehistoric caves in France earlier this year inspired me to write a novel about them. I'm looking for a few advance copy readers. If you're interested, please DM me. Book description below.

SHE'S FROM TWO WORLDS. SHE CAN ONLY LIVE IN ONE.

​Fifteen-year-old Anna thinks she’s just exploring a cave in France — until she touches a prehistoric handprint and wakes up fifteen thousand years in the past. Stranded among hunters who seem to recognize her, she learns the truth: she was born here.

When the wall opens again, Anna must make an impossible choice. Go back to her own time. Or stay with the Ice Age family she never knew she had. She can’t have both.

Hello, my name is Sabahat Komonaj. I wrote a memoir called "When All I Had Left Was Faith." It is my true story about faith, healing, and prayer. When I was a young mother of five, paralysis struck my body, and God healed me — I learned to walk again.

I have a French draft of the book (about 19,000 words). I need a native French reader to check that it reads naturally in French. This is free — I only ask for your honest help. Please send me a message if you can help.

Thank you, and God bless you. — Sabi —Excerpt from Chapter 1:

Il y a des moments où l'on n'a plus aucune force. On ne sait pas si son corps va se rétablir ni comment on va prendre soin de ses enfants. C'est là que la suite de mon histoire a commencé.

Parfois, les gens pensent que la foi vient quand tout va bien. Pour moi, la foi est venue quand il ne me restait presque plus rien.

The novel is about a young man who is afflicted by a curse that outlaws him, and gives him a mark that is impossible to hide. His goal is to find somewhere safe to live, while he desperately longs for his home and to return to the life he had before. All while a inhumanly strong man is searching for people with the curse, because he wants to prevent a prophecy from happening.

If someone would please beta read this, that would be awesome.